Errors Identification for 2013

A month ago, exactly on 21st December, at the early morning a beautiful girl called Niken awaken by the sound of water tap near her room. It was 5 a.m when she took a shower and prepared for going to school. As she is a dormitory student, she has to complete her duty first before go. After she did the duty, tidy up her bed, and had a breakfast she leaved her room at 06.30 a.m with a happily and cheerful face. She really loves that day because it was the last day on her 3rd semester and of course will be the beginning of her holiday.

Along the way to her campus, as usual she said ‘hello’ to her friends with her cutest smile. When she arrived at her school yard, she directly go to her class where her other friend were waiting for their advisor. Took a seat on the front line, full of enthusiasm she was listening to her advisor advice to always be a humble hearten person. Sometimes later the advisor distributed the report to each student, Niken either. She immediately opened it, and then read her score, but her sight was stopped at the English score which is written 80 for the theory and 78 for the practice. She couldn’t hide her disappointment seeing her score that was not passed the standard. Meanwhile sometimes ago her English teacher announced that she got the highest score on role play which taken as speaking score. She didn’t care with her theory score because she is not really good in reading. She used to be humble towards her score but not for English moreover if it is speaking and practical score. As she good enough in English especially speaking, she will very disappointed when her score is not as good as what she have expected. Niken was too shy to talk about her score with her friends. When some of them ask her, she just stayed in silence and gave her sweet smile so that their friends noticed something wrong with her score.

Still mourning her score, out of the blue the bell rang means it was time to go home. Niken got back to her room immediately, ignored people who asked about her report. As her parents were going to pick her up one hour later, she started the packing. Even, when her parents arrived and ask how her report was, she just mentioned the 5 highest score, rejected to show the report to them, and fortunately her parents didn’t suspicious with it. As usual, at home she kept her report in her cupboard so that nobody will open it. But trouble came when her mom put the ironed clothes, she was curious with her daughter’s report. She opened it page by page, then caught by written score ‘78’ and when she looked onto the lesson it was English practice. Of course it was unbelievable for her, as her daughter often joint speech and storytelling competition at the Junior High School. When her mom approached and ask about that score, Niken tried to explain it well. She told her mom that there’s not only speaking for the practical, blog project and her activeness in the class. But her mom argued it, Niken may not hang out along the holiday as the punishment. Niken couldn’t refuse that because it was absolutely her fault.

  She tried hard to enjoy that boring holiday. Opened her blog, did browsing, etc. Out of the blue she realized something when she opened her friend’s blog, it was quiet better than hers, the simple but clear articles, and also the background. ‘May be this is why my practical score was bad’ she said. Then she started to modify her blog, changed the background, put some pictures, and another widgets.

On the first day of 4th semester, as usual the one who need the report revision submit their report onto the advisor’s room. At the first break time, Niken walk to her advisor’s room cheerfully, and then put her report calmly, wishing her English teacher will kindly open her blog then increase her score, as she had repair and modify it. Work harder, do everythings seriously and always holding on her passion.